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Hinata - for Kansanis contest by ~Kuronawi:iconKuronawi:


©2008-2010 ~Kuronawi
:iconkuronawi:

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Feel free to give me Back-up on how to make it better.

It's for :iconkansani:s contest where you were supposed to draw a pick with a scene from one of her fanfics.

I choose : [link]

And the scene:
She gently stroke the photograph in her hand, without looking at it, she didn’t need to look at it anymore, because she knew every aspect of it by heart. Instead she looked at the stars, looking for a shooting star.

“If you wish at a shooting star three times before it disappears, your wish will be granted…” She mumbled to herself, as a few tears rolled down her cheeks. How many nights hadn’t she been sitting here, looking after shooting stars, so she could make a wish? And how many times hadn’t she failed to wish at the star three times, before it disappeared? She laid down on the cold, hard ground, and sighed.


EDIT:
Fixed grass, tears and photo. Thanks to all who told me what I could improve :3

Hinata (c) Masashi Kishimoto
Fanfiction (c) :iconkansani:
Art (c) :iconkuronawi:

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:iconkansani:
yays :3 I love it 8D

I'll update my journal ASAP

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isnwod dna spu ynam os
My heart's a battleground
snoitome eurt deen I
wonk uoy naht noitceffa erom deen I
snoitome eurt deen I


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ಠ3ಠ I Am A pretty pretty princess, Bitch
:iconkuronawi:
Yayz, thank you.. but...

... Did you even read the description I had D:

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I wanna be a cloud when I grow up! 8D ~<3
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My avatar was made by Colorful-Darkness ~<3 --> [link] She's awesome :3
:iconkansani:
yeah, I did?

Did I miss anything?

You said you would change it, and stuff

--
isnwod dna spu ynam os
My heart's a battleground
snoitome eurt deen I
wonk uoy naht noitceffa erom deen I
snoitome eurt deen I


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ಠ3ಠ I Am A pretty pretty princess, Bitch
:iconsnapelupinlvr:
It looks cool as =) Reading your thingomobobby that says you want people to tell you how to make it better, all I can think of is adding a few tears because the story says she's crying :p

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-->"Are you out of your Vulcan mind?!"<--

Metatron: Do you go around drenching everyone who comes into your room with flame-retardant chemicals? No wonder you're single. ¬¬
:iconkankuro4ever:
I honestly can't think of a way to make this pic better because it looks fantastic ^_^ :boogie:

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:music:Life forms. . .
you tiny little life forms. . .
you precious little life forms. . .
where are you?
:music:
:iconwhitelunareclipse:
I think it looks great! One thing, though. It looks like she is floating above the grass instead of stitting on it. Try making some blades of grass stick up next to her butt, shoes or something ;3

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Wolf artist before the recent fad. Deal with it.
:icondragon-dame:
Looks sweet as!!!!!!
It's a sure contestant!

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I shall take on the world with a crayon!
:crazy: MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! :crazy:
AND I WILL BE VICTORIOUS!
:D
:iconkuronawi:
Oh thank you. I actually had some tears there, but I guess I'll have to make 'em more visible. Thank you! :D

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I wanna be a cloud when I grow up! 8D ~<3
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My avatar was made by Colorful-Darkness ~<3 --> [link] She's awesome :3
:iconkuronawi:
You sure? Wow, thanks! 8D ~<3

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I wanna be a cloud when I grow up! 8D ~<3
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My avatar was made by Colorful-Darkness ~<3 --> [link] She's awesome :3

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